Wow. That was probably the first review that I've gotten a critique on. You're slave!Anakin fic sounds interesting I'll have to find it one day.
And Anakin's about 21 in this fic. It doesn't matter how old he gets, he's always 'boy' to me. There's something about him that no matter what the age it just fits. And even as an adult he can act like like a child. The next chapter will be from his pov anyway so more of his history.
Obi-Wan in the slave market, well I needed him to find Anakin didn't I? He probably didn't stop for directions and taking the easy way out: the Force led him to Anakin and before he realized it he was crushed and following the herd ^.^
I do have a bad habit of over using words, that I admit hands down. It's sometimes hard to find the right way of saying something.
In my world the AgriCorps doesn't enforce any Jedi Code really, just the peace principles. If you're a farmer it doesn't all that matter if you're attached does it? You're not neutral to conflict, just growing things for people.
Thanks for the comments and sure, if you want to beta each other's work that would be great:)
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You're slave!Anakin fic sounds interesting I'll have to find it one day.
And Anakin's about 21 in this fic. It doesn't matter how old he gets, he's always 'boy' to me. There's something about him that no matter what the age it just fits. And even as an adult he can act like like a child.
The next chapter will be from his pov anyway so more of his history.
Obi-Wan in the slave market, well I needed him to find Anakin didn't I? He probably didn't stop for directions and taking the easy way out: the Force led him to Anakin and before he realized it he was crushed and following the herd ^.^
I do have a bad habit of over using words, that I admit hands down. It's sometimes hard to find the right way of saying something.
In my world the AgriCorps doesn't enforce any Jedi Code really, just the peace principles. If you're a farmer it doesn't all that matter if you're attached does it? You're not neutral to conflict, just growing things for people.
Thanks for the comments and sure, if you want to beta each other's work that would be great:)